Hi Soheil,

Here's my final contribution with proofreading.

There is a mix usage of xxx-centred and xxx-centered. I suggest we go with xxx-centred.

[Behavior] misspelled - should be [Behaviour]

[image: Screenshot 2021-10-21 at 09.38.30.png]

[Youtube] should be with a capital T - [YouTube]

[image: Screenshot 2021-10-21 at 09.41.47.png]

Suggest to replace [widespreadly] with [widely] [image: Screenshot 2021-10-21 at 09.42.39.png]

The gantt chart is still not populated with T5.3 - should be the same as T5.1 and T5.2 [image: Screenshot 2021-10-21 at 09.44.17.png] [thighly] is misspelled - should be [thightly]

[image: Screenshot 2021-10-21 at 09.49.27.png] [expertises] should be [expertise]

[image: Screenshot 2021-10-21 at 09.50.16.png] The yellow marked text has partly the wrong font. [image: Screenshot 2021-10-21 at 09.50.41.png] After SIG there are two commas = one too many.

[image: Screenshot 2021-10-21 at 09.52.02.png]

I hope this helps.

Regards Jon