Hello Soheil,

I have proofread the uploaded abstract and have two comments/suggestions.

1. Is a [,] missing between 'manner' and 'which'?
2. Is 'application' superfluous?

Please see attached photos.

Regards
Jon




On Thu, Oct 21, 2021 at 12:57 AM Soheil Human <soheil.human@wu.ac.at> wrote:
Dear all,

Fyi, I added a new version of the abstract to the portal. I’d appreciate it if someone proofreads it. 

The security section and ethics forms are also both added to the portal. => They can be reviewed by you.

The current version of the Main document is available on our shared folder, as I wrote you before. I will keep that file updated until the final submission.

Best,
Soheil 


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